Remember all those wonderful notes we got on draft 3? Brian and I discussed at great length every single one of them. Many we addressed. Others we tossed. Some weren’t immediately relevant, but sparked ideas that led us down some pretty cool rabbit holes. This draft expanded by a couple pages (I had been hoping to shave a few… c’est la vie!), but I feel it got significantly stronger. And at the end of the day that’s what’s most important. Now… more fresh eyes and more notes!