It took an absurdly long while to receive notes back from folks on Draft 4. On the bright side, Brian and I got to distance ourselves from the script a bit… certainly more than expected. And with that distance came new perspective when we finally dove back in. We’ve been working on the 5th draft for about the last three weeks and are making great progress. In addition to parsing through this round of feedback, I’ve found a few ways to allow my mind to wander. And several new ideas have sparked over the last week… ideas that both Brian and I are excited about pursuing. Not only will these (hopefully!) strengthen the script, but we should be able to cut upwards of TEN pages. I’m stoked just thinking about that!